连南河 秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008 Posts: 342 Location: Toronto 连南河Collection |
Posted: 2012-01-03 07:44:33 Post subject: 七律 同是一家人 |
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----贺万锦市孙逸仙路(Sun Yat-sen Avenue )正式揭幕
新年圣诞几轮回,
碧水欢波大雁飞。
雨雪松枫缠故土,
溪流岸上感清辉。
今天把酒临疏影,
明日兜风送翠微。
梦里挑灯乡月就,
边城万锦彩云归。
Jan. 2, 2012 Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)5:00-6:00pm _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2012-01-03 22:02:48 Post subject: |
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新年圣诞几轮回,
碧水欢波大雁飞。
学习!!——首联轻盈流畅! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-01-04 02:50:19 Post subject: |
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问候连兄,新年好!
轻盈笔风,学习欣赏! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2012-01-04 13:57:37 Post subject: |
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雁飞千里,牵挂故土。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2012-01-04 17:22:48 Post subject: |
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结句亦佳,不仅紧扣詩题,且寄故国之思。欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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