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七律 同是一家人
连南河
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PostPosted: 2012-01-03 07:44:33    Post subject: 七律 同是一家人 Reply with quote

----贺万锦市孙逸仙路(Sun Yat-sen Avenue )正式揭幕

新年圣诞几轮回,
碧水欢波大雁飞。
雨雪松枫缠故土,
溪流岸上感清辉。
今天把酒临疏影,
明日兜风送翠微。
梦里挑灯乡月就,
边城万锦彩云归。

Jan. 2, 2012 Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)5:00-6:00pm
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一路雨丝一路风
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山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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PostPosted: 2012-01-03 22:02:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

新年圣诞几轮回,
碧水欢波大雁飞。

学习!!——首联轻盈流畅!
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2012-01-04 02:50:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候连兄,新年好!
轻盈笔风,学习欣赏!
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2012-01-04 13:57:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

雁飞千里,牵挂故土。
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2012-01-04 17:22:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

结句亦佳,不仅紧扣詩题,且寄故国之思。欣赏!
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