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大水

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-26 18:57:30 Post subject: 大水

大水大水从青草的尖上漫过来了大水从石头里漫过来了大水从神汉潘叔的神调里漫过来了大水好大的水呀像黎明巨大翅膀的影子是什么在悄悄地退却再退却这是油啊父亲我的父亲呀为什么你还偷偷地哭呢难道没听见麦子喝水时喉节发出巨大的声响在乡下这样的情景实在是不怎么新鲜你的祖先都流过同样的泪水这是一种来自心底最悲怆最沉重的力量大水漫进黑夜里去了父亲这是光芒流淌的声音你一生不知经历了多少次为什么你额头上萎缩的根须还不舒展开我知道大水已漫进你干旱的心里了

金金
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Posted: 2007-03-27 01:33:00 Post subject:

气势、感情都不错，再多写点该多好：）呵呵，我想的// 问好先生！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-27 16:45:24 Post subject:

谢金金诗人！！！远握！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-03-28 05:45:06 Post subject:

大水漫进黑夜里去了父亲这是光芒流淌的声音你一生不知经历了多少次为什么你额头上萎缩的根须还不舒展开我知道大水已漫进你干旱的心里了欣赏学习~ 问好!

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-28 16:34:27 Post subject:

谢半溪明月诗人！！！！祝愉快！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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