影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2011-12-21 02:21:38 Post subject: 七律•冬至有怀 |
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七律•冬至有怀
几度深寒冬至封，家山一带暮云重。
天南无雪适归雁，江北有枫含倦容。
尘外相思霜月早，风中摇落夕阳浓。
客堪水饺积年味，杯酒吟余夜色溶。
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2011-12-21 13:44:17 Post subject: |
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| 无雪有枫景色异，水饺杯酒友情浓。 |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2011-12-21 17:11:42 Post subject: |
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“尘外相思霜月早，风中摇落夕阳浓”
切合时令，融汇感怀，欣赏佳构。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2011-12-21 20:28:53 Post subject: |
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好难进来，连着几天急死人。
端的好诗！中两联好工稳！ |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2011-12-22 02:31:05 Post subject: |
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节日问候朋友们
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