笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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 Posted: 2011-12-05 22:59:55 Post subject: 五律-怜荷次韵和五兄 |
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端的五兄好咏！
（一）
叶老已蛩知，枫红写满丝。深秋天做主，晨露地吟诗。
霜辱投怀早，花黄入目迟。哀哀荷未死，芯苦喜由之。
附五兄原玉：
落叶水当知，飘红数几丝。荷秋谁作主，藕意挽成诗。
赏色须看早，拈花追又迟。垂垂芯未死，味苦也由之。 |
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影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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| Posted: 2011-12-06 03:07:15 Post subject: |
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霜辱投怀早，花黄入目迟。
问好笑版
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2011-12-06 18:07:49 Post subject: |
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怜荷之韵，唱和俱佳。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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宁家珍
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2009
Posts: 470
Location: 中国黄山
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| Posted: 2011-12-07 05:28:01 Post subject: |
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欣赏学习，问好笑聊诗友及楼上的各位朋友。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2011-12-12 02:20:01 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢寒水兄、黄老师、家珍诗友的鼓励！问好师友们。 |
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