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白水
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Posted: 2011-10-09 15:15:39 Post subject: 秋韵

秋韵秋阳如蜜如舌尖一丝温软的腻滑如儿时调色板上一抹随性的水乳随性地勾画着秋的轮廓此时没有荷塘没有月晕只有你我踩响北美的落枫咿咿呀呀地弄响秦淮紫箫

骨笛
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Posted: 2011-10-10 02:27:24 Post subject:

愿这枫叶，是书中的珍藏。。 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-10-10 05:12:40 Post subject:

秋阳似酒，把一抹暖色洒在心头枫叶斑斓象清蒸的螃蟹金黄熟透浸泡在暖暖的秋日里如痴如醉品尝着五彩变换的秋叶忘忧忘愁。。。

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-10 05:20:23 Post subject:

骨笛 wrote:

愿这枫叶，是书中的珍藏。。

谢谢骨笛，但愿。

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-10 05:27:37 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋阳似酒，
把一抹暖色洒在心头
枫叶斑斓
象清蒸的螃蟹金黄熟透
浸泡在暖暖的秋日里
如痴如醉
品尝着五彩变换的秋叶
忘忧忘愁
。。。
...

哈，谢谢和诗。
回来数日，还没顾上吃螃蟹呢。前日秋游，说过把希英的秋阳如蜜写进诗歌的，你又来个秋阳似酒。可惜希英没上这个网站，否则咱们可以拉着她玩接龙了。还有两张照片，不知怎的就是发不上来 Sad

黑眼睛的苏珊
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Posted: 2011-10-10 09:07:51 Post subject:

白水的诗有味、有色、有声，那种甜美、从舌尖直到心头；那踏着落叶的声音，从耳膜直到心田，好一首秦淮紫萧，失落在它的故乡，却吹响在遥远的异乡。进士的诗摆出了秋的盛宴，把酒品蟹，啊，想起了薛宝钗的螃蟹宴，什么时候我们真的在枫叶下摆它一桌，用秋色佐餐，也浪漫一把。

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-10 12:48:47 Post subject:

美丽的黑眼睛的苏珊，不愧清华才女，回帖都溢出文采。等你的大作。被你们一说，真想吃螃蟹了

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-10-10 16:55:10 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

美丽的黑眼睛的苏珊，不愧清华才女，回帖都溢出文采。等你的大作。
...

苏珊的散文游记文采飞扬，味美鲜香，值得一品。

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-10 17:48:17 Post subject:

是，我也有读过。图文并茂，神采飞扬。苏珊，可否百忙之中抽空贴过来，省得我们到处找

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-13 11:44:12 Post subject:

水，回来了！哈哈，可心还在故土，还在你妈妈身边哟

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-13 14:59:15 Post subject:

是，回去挺好玩的。给你贴一张荷塘的照片。那天在荷塘边还摘了些荷叶蒸糯米饭。本来觉得不应该摘，后来人家说已采过莲蓬了，没关系。于是乎，，，，，，贼不打自招

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-13 18:15:05 Post subject:

哈，好美！收藏了。

黑眼睛的苏珊
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Posted: 2011-10-13 18:45:19 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

是，我也有读过。图文并茂，神采飞扬。苏珊，可否百忙之中抽空贴过来，省得我们到处找 Very Happy

响应白水，刚刚把一篇旧作贴到了《北美枫》的散文游记栏目，不知有没有人看。

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-14 02:11:07 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

哈，好美！收藏了。

惨了，这次做贼的证据想删也删不掉了 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-14 02:17:39 Post subject:

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

是，我也有读过。图文并茂，神采飞扬。苏珊，可否百忙之中抽空贴过来，省得我们到处找 Very Happy

响应白水，刚刚把一篇旧作贴到了《北美枫》的散文游记栏目，不知有没有人看。

文采飞扬，很喜欢读呢。
可否把你finger lake 的那篇也贴过来，喜欢。

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Posted: 2011-10-24 10:10:27 Post subject:

比喻独特，别有情趣 _________________ 晴宝儿

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-25 17:26:01 Post subject:

问好宝儿，那几天刚从国内返加，时差没倒过来就和朋友们去看红叶，顺便润润笔

许登彦
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Posted: 2011-10-28 01:04:54 Post subject:

生命轮回渗透着童年的记忆，写得不错，问好！ _________________ 许登彦

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Posted: 2011-10-31 16:24:31 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好宝儿，那几天刚从国内返加，时差没倒过来就和朋友们去看红叶，顺便润润笔 Very Happy

洛夫也到国内了。明天到图书馆去看洛夫的诗歌朗诵会。

祝白水姐一切顺利。
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白水
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Posted: 2011-11-04 16:25:19 Post subject:

许登彦 wrote:

生命轮回渗透着童年的记忆，写得不错，问好！

谢谢鼓励。问好周末

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