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七律-和白云老师《秋色》
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PostPosted: 2011-10-16 19:13:15    Post subject: 七律-和白云老师《秋色》 Reply with quote
问好白云老师！临屏和一首七律-秋色，以增氛围：

秋色风光无限好，悠悠流水韵绵长。
双眸映入河山美，只笔描抒锦绣章。
不问心情能否爽，为求脑海启承香。
娇娇嫩菊沾晨露，艳丽诚如巧着装。
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PostPosted: 2011-10-23 06:47:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
临屏都写这么好，严重嫉妒 Wink
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PostPosted: 2011-10-23 08:22:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
“不问心情能否爽，为求脑海岂承香”，
好联！一种淡定之情。
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PostPosted: 2011-10-24 15:41:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
临屏都写这么好，严重嫉妒 Wink


问好白水！谢谢关注支持板块！

毕竟是应制诗歌，总觉不尽人意。
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PostPosted: 2011-10-24 15:42:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
“不问心情能否爽，为求脑海岂承香”，
好联！一种淡定之情。


问好黄老师！谢谢黄老师点评鼓励！
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