白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2011-10-12 19:09:04 Post subject: 渔歌子 |
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隆重秋色醉丹楓,
楓园欣然友情濃,
濃似酒,
酒般红,
红叶代笔謝意隆。 _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-12 19:17:42 Post subject: |
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此首詞採用《首尾相含》的手法(即上句末字为下句首字),以表达对朋友們热情关怀的深深致謝之思衷! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-13 03:24:29 Post subject: |
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祝福老师健健康康、快快乐乐!和一首:
秋色浓浓枫叶酬,酬和师友当诗柔。
柔温深感情怀事,事见奉和才是秋! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-13 05:04:46 Post subject: |
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好词好诗,唱和殷殷,文情友情,一片真诚! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-13 06:58:01 Post subject: |
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謝笑聊和诗!《首尾相含》意情隆! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-13 07:02:03 Post subject: |
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黄兄,〝文情友情一片真誠〞说得何等的好啊! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-13 15:01:42 Post subject: |
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深深祝福老师康复! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2011-10-13 15:54:33 Post subject: |
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白云老师多保重! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-13 18:47:27 Post subject: |
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首尾相含,情浓如蜜。感动!
白云兄病愈不久,望多加保重。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-14 07:03:04 Post subject: |
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謝謝庆宏! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-14 07:04:00 Post subject: |
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謝謝冰清! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-19 01:57:45 Post subject: |
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好久未见老师,知老师思念网友,大为感动。向老师问好。
我每天都想来北美枫,但十有八九登录不成。有时即使成功登录,也不能发贴。
我绝不是抱怨,而是想说明迟复的原因。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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