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五律-寄语残荷

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-01 04:12:57 Post subject: 五律-寄语残荷

文/笑聊蛩泣西风舞，蝉声已绝时。残躯刚入梦，泥藕渐成诗。待到端阳早，才逢立夏迟？清香虽是远，六月再捐私！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-01 07:30:31 Post subject:

“清香虽是远，六月再捐私” 残荷不残。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-10-01 08:50:49 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“清香虽是远，六月再捐私”
残荷不残。

同感！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-02 02:03:35 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“清香虽是远，六月再捐私”
残荷不残。

问候黄老师！谢谢提读雅评！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-02 02:04:28 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

“清香虽是远，六月再捐私”
残荷不残。

同感！

谢庆宏兄赏读雅评！问好！

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2011-10-02 03:56:48 Post subject:

蛩泣西风舞，蝉声已绝时。重阳见晚秋了 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-05 03:31:52 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

蛩泣西风舞，蝉声已绝时。

重阳见晚秋了

寒水兄，又是一个晚秋！致秋祺！

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:56:03 Post subject:

残躯刚入梦，泥藕渐成诗。欣赏好律，尤喜此联。问好笑聊兄。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-06 15:08:15 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

残躯刚入梦，泥藕渐成诗。
欣赏好律，尤喜此联。
问好笑聊兄。

谢谢恢宗兄雅赏！问好！

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Posted: 2011-10-06 17:07:01 Post subject:

欣赏。问好笑卿兄！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-07 04:14:25 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

欣赏。问好笑卿兄！

谢谢莹雪M雅赏！问好并致秋祺！

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