笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-01 04:12:57 Post subject: 五律-寄语残荷 |
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蛩泣西风舞,蝉声已绝时。
残躯刚入梦,泥藕渐成诗。
待到端阳早,才逢立夏迟?
清香虽是远,六月再捐私! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-01 07:30:31 Post subject: |
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“清香虽是远,六月再捐私”
残荷不残。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2011-10-01 08:50:49 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
“清香虽是远,六月再捐私”
残荷不残。 |
同感! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-02 02:03:35 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
“清香虽是远,六月再捐私”
残荷不残。 |
问候黄老师!谢谢提读雅评! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-02 02:04:28 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
黄洋界 wrote: |
“清香虽是远,六月再捐私”
残荷不残。 |
同感! |
谢庆宏兄赏读雅评!问好! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-02 03:56:48 Post subject: |
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蛩泣西风舞,蝉声已绝时。
重阳见晚秋了 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-05 03:31:52 Post subject: |
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影沉寒水 wrote: |
蛩泣西风舞,蝉声已绝时。
重阳见晚秋了 |
寒水兄,又是一个晚秋!致秋祺! |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:56:03 Post subject: |
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残躯刚入梦,泥藕渐成诗。
欣赏好律,尤喜此联。
问好笑聊兄。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-06 15:08:15 Post subject: |
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胡恢宗 wrote: |
残躯刚入梦,泥藕渐成诗。
欣赏好律,尤喜此联。
问好笑聊兄。 |
谢谢恢宗兄雅赏!问好! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-06 17:07:01 Post subject: |
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欣赏。问好笑卿兄! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-10-07 04:14:25 Post subject: |
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谢谢莹雪M雅赏!问好并致秋祺! |
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