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命 铃 臀 肛——戏说汉字小俳4首
黄淮
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PostPosted: 2011-09-26 16:53:14    Post subject: 命 铃 臀 肛——戏说汉字小俳4首 Reply with quote

[b]命

叩门人

还发什么愣

快请进





摇一摇

铃声传口令

快集中





排泄口

工作不卑贱

把好关





金銮殿

明月铺阶前

坐江山

2011.9.5[/b]
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PostPosted: 2011-09-28 16:32:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有味道,学习,问好
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PostPosted: 2011-09-29 00:06:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

这东西不好写啊,我也正练习。
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PostPosted: 2013-02-10 21:55:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢点评!黄淮致意!
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