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文引自《中华诗词论坛》有感
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PostPosted: 2011-09-14 19:43:11    Post subject: 文引自《中华诗词论坛》有感 Reply with quote

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让格律见鬼去吧,凡语言就会有平仄,至于如何平仄完全可以根据情感和语言习惯顺其自然,不要拘泥定势,且不说先有诗还是先有平仄定格的,谁是此诗此格律的第一发明人使用者,哪首诗词又没有变调变格,你做五言,七言长的就可以叫律诗,短的就可以叫绝句,要不就是长短句的词。
因拘泥格律诗亡于唐,因拘泥格律词死于宋,诗以言志表情,看看现在的诗人们写的蹩脚的格律诗词没有一点新意生机,满篇腐尸疙瘩气,多是拘泥格律使然。即便你有新意心中澎湃也会被格律搞的拗口难当,多半不能畅快淋漓口吐珠玉,畅情抒怀。倘若你是研究古诗词的可以定格定律完全按照古时的格律韵脚,但不要以此框住别人吧,现在人能准确发出古代的平仄吗,北方人可以念出广东人的平仄吗,语言的变迁早已不能和古人的平仄了,语言发展了,诗词还在如此拘泥古人,这样诗词不会发展,变成古诗词研究者玩弄的蹩脚的化石,说他蹩脚是说,若大的论坛,或若大的中国有谁的诗词可与李杜媲美,那么荡气回肠,痛快淋漓,信手拈来。鲁迅说,一切好诗到唐以做完。也是源于此感叹格律的束缚吧。崇尚自然格律或自由格律不必要死板硬套古人的格律,让我们用自由清新文字,酣畅淋漓的诗歌咏叹这美好的生活吧。
我不是说有了定式格律就一定不好,而是说同一个字古今语音不同,仄平也不同,如果强般古音律今声会有东施效颦之虞,观今人作诗多是徒有格律,少了古人的神采风骨,洋洋洒洒几千篇,只不过是可以称作格律范本,却难叫做诗。我的文字可能过激,全当引玉之文吧。
来此论坛本就是来学格律的但见虽有格律却难见好诗,愤而出狂言。觉得出格律之外却有好诗,或是前人未发的格律吧。故而提出自然格律或自由格律之论。浅见之处,直接指出,不必含蓄。谢谢!


读后有感:

汉营偏作曹营梦?哗众何须出语惊?
领袖诗评还有论,井蛙视野太狂狰!

注:老毛:“律诗要讲平仄,不讲平仄,即非律诗。”(《致陈毅》)
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PostPosted: 2011-09-15 08:09:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

自由体新诗与格律古韵各有千秋,何必自持一端否定另一端?唐代是格律诗顶峰宋代是词的盛世,但唐宋以后仍有格律诗和词的佳作出现。

不会作格律诗的的一些人常常偏激武断地否定格律诗,心胸未免太窄。而能作出格律诗又去谩骂否定格律诗就有些莫名其妙了。格律的形成是便于朗诵起来抑扬顿挫朗朗上口,一旦掌握了格律的平仄规律就不会觉得困难了。格律诗有其特有的对称美和音韵美,不懂欣赏的人才会片面地反对否定格律诗。

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PostPosted: 2011-09-15 16:58:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

要玩球(篮,排,足等球类),就得遵守玩球规则,
要跳舞,就得遵守跳舞规则,
要玩古詩词,也得遵守古诗词的规则。
其理一也!否则,就是乱来!
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PostPosted: 2011-09-15 21:49:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
自由体新诗与格律古韵各有千秋,何必自持一端否定另一端?唐代是格律诗顶峰宋代是词的盛世,但唐宋以后仍有格律诗和词的佳作出现。
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问候庆宏兄!同意你的观点.
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PostPosted: 2011-09-15 21:52:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
要玩球(篮,排,足等球类),就得遵守玩球规则,
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问候黄老师!同意您的观点.谢谢支持!
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PostPosted: 2011-09-16 21:35:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

以篮球为例。。
篮球,从无到有 --创新
篮球规则也有过变动--改进-- 推陈出新
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PostPosted: 2011-09-17 16:48:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

sliu6 wrote:
以篮球为例。。
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这个问题的焦点,在于一个会写,而且还得到认证的人之口,是不是觉得奇怪了些?诗于唐后,就无佳作?词于宋后,就无精品?

谢谢sliu6朋友赏读点评!问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-09-19 02:13:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

同意老师们的观点,我对此说的态度是:他说他的,我作我的,根本不要去理它。
好几次都未登录成功,今天终于进来了。向各位问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-09-19 15:25:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习,问好朋友们!
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PostPosted: 2011-09-22 02:25:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡恢宗 wrote:
同意老师们的观点,我对此说的态度是:他说他的,我作我的,根本不要去理它。
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谢胡兄点评!问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-09-22 02:26:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
学习,问好朋友们!


莹雪MM好久不见了。问好!
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