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五绝黄山奇松怪石

宁家珍
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Posted: 2011-08-24 06:09:23 Post subject: 五绝黄山奇松怪石

五绝黄山奇松怪石（旧韵）文宁家珍黄山多美景，百态亦千奇。石石无声画，松松有韵诗。图 LIN MU CHIEN

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-08-25 17:15:01 Post subject:

全诗概括有余，而具象稍欠。建议就奇松，怪石，分别写来，或许更佳。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-09-03 00:43:11 Post subject:

与黄老师点评同感！如扩写律诗或许更好。问好诗友！

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-09-04 01:53:47 Post subject:

石石无声画，松松有韵诗。有新意啊！ _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-09-08 02:43:31 Post subject:

问候诗友！中秋佳节愉快！

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