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六月(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2011-09-03 22:11:19    Post subject: 六月(组诗) Reply with quote

《六月》

坐在今天的对面,仔细

打量

要感谢六月,有如此多的阳光

让玉米健康地成长

许多的歌唱都葱葱郁郁



六月,我开始拒绝写作

一直走着,亨着长调

在玉米的深处,忍不住停下

吻一柣草

说过的话,开始呼喊我的名字

《这些年》

这些年,一直在进行诗歌写作

河水如此清纯,无法躲藏的夜

玉米看守的六月,无人听懂的方言

都会发出这大地上最好听的声音

在岁月的树上,结满了我们回忆的梦



这些年,一直在进行诗歌写作

月光是那样的温柔,年少的一无所知

长成了树木也长成了另一个人

好像最初的声音

在细小的心事里,诗情画意



我用最快的速度了解

诗歌

因为,这些年

我用诗歌写作透亮我的生活

《六月》

如此迅捷的六月,面对

一场又一场阳光

所有的思绪都成为水边的草

随风而动

起伏风和树的写意

穿透阳光的酣睡

在写作里,写下今天的年轻



这些年,六月都会有玉米在成长

还有阳光

让每夜的梦,都无法入眠



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2011.06.29
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PostPosted: 2011-09-04 05:51:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

表现手法新颖,学习,问好。
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