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[07年新诗作]诗人的香烟闪着火花
李智强
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PostPosted: 2007-03-26 17:53:05    Post subject: [07年新诗作]诗人的香烟闪着火花 Reply with quote
路灯被电线杆高高举起，替代朔月保安
将盗窃的恶念消灭在光芒箭下
灯光只占夜的一隅

床旁的蚊香燃着
被迷了魂、摄了魄的蚊子乖乖受死
我易如反掌地报了血仇

点上一根香烟，一个诗人，在一个无月的夜
吹捧嘴角边吞吐的烟雾
时间被我似笑非笑的思考放逐，永不回朝
暗了又明了的蚊香的星点，墙壁斑驳
烟灰白了烟头，而后坠地
从我的指间，跌进黑暗
烟缸被烟头撑饱
短暂的梦呓排遣不了我多余的忧愁
披上外套起身，信笔写了一段烟火的文字
明天，烟头洒落的金钱，就是
出卖它们的稿酬

明晚仍旧要点它们
烟头向上，庆祝
今夜所有一切的生日宴会。

2007.3.27凌晨00：33
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PostPosted: 2007-03-26 22:40:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
轻松幽默。有韵味。要把诗歌写出幽默味，并不容易。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-27 02:35:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢司马老师的赏读。问好。
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