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醉花阴-敬荷

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-22 04:28:29 Post subject: 醉花阴-敬荷

文/笑聊（别体）淤泥无染仙家韵，入世凡尘俊。任雨打风吹，兀自风骚，俏立清辉近。不甘堕落沉沦隐，焉诉轻轻恨。去杂念丝丝，潇洒闲行，碧玉新颜吻。改了两句：去杂念丝思，潇洒闲行，

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-07-22 04:47:45 Post subject:

清荷品格尽见，敬荷当理也！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-22 04:59:13 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

清荷品格尽见，敬荷当理也！

问候黄老师！

深谢老师雅誉点评！

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-07-24 02:31:05 Post subject:

任雨打风吹，兀自风骚，俏立清辉近。写出了荷的高尚品格，礼当敬重。向老师问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-24 03:47:27 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

任雨打风吹，兀自风骚，俏立清辉近。
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谢谢恢宗兄赞誉鼓励！问好兄台。

宁家珍
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Posted: 2011-07-28 05:12:51 Post subject: 。

胡恢宗 wrote:

任雨打风吹，兀自风骚，俏立清辉近。
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欣赏佳作，问好笑聊诗友。

米运刚
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Posted: 2011-07-29 04:21:45 Post subject:

笑聊兄的词，颇有宋人韵味。欣赏！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-30 16:34:43 Post subject:

宁家珍 wrote:

胡恢宗 wrote:

任雨打风吹，兀自风骚，俏立清辉近。
...

欣赏佳作，问好笑聊诗友。

感谢家珍诗友赞誉!

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-30 16:52:00 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

笑聊兄的词，颇有宋人韵味。欣赏！

运刚兄好久不见了！祝夏安！

深谢运刚兄赞誉点评！

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-08-02 17:53:36 Post subject:

身在淤泥中，不与淤泥同。笑聊兄的词尽显荷花好品格。谢谢笑聊兄的理解，真可谓：高山流水有知音。诗，史与现实，要读懂，实不易。

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-08-05 04:53:23 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏兄赞誉鼓励！夏安！庆宏兄不必客气，我也是按照客观事实来说话。（主要还是诗、史与现实的因果关系要搞清楚）

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Posted: 2011-08-05 08:01:52 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

谢谢庆宏兄赞誉鼓励！夏安！
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笑聊兄说得对。如果不懂诗而谈诗，不懂史而论史，看现实也就一知半解，也就文不对题难免闹笑话。当然，故意与人为难另当别论。而诗的好坏，应由众人来评，如果不喜欢的人，大可一笑而过，略去不计，方显宽阔胸怀；如果诗有瑕疵，只要具体指出，诚恳待人，方显为友之道。

问好笑聊兄！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-08-06 03:16:18 Post subject:

庆宏兄说得对：故意与人为难另当别论。而诗的好坏，应由众人来评，如果不喜欢的人，大可一笑而过，略去不计，方显宽阔胸怀；如果诗有瑕疵，只要具体指出，诚恳待人，方显为友之道。欣赏庆宏兄的待人之道！问好！

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