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(原创)书
春去来兮
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PostPosted: 2007-03-25 20:27:11    Post subject: (原创)书 Reply with quote

白天
我寂寞时
想看它

夜晚
它寂寞时
想看我

我闭着眼睛
失眠

它合上眼睛
假寐

我伸手
把灯叫醒

灯傻傻地
看着我们
傻傻地看着
......

傻傻的我
也想把太阳叫醒

可还没等我
伸手的时候
傻傻的它
却已经把
傻傻的我哄睡

而那盏傻傻的灯
却失眠又寂寞了
一宿


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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-03-26 04:43:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,好。有些传统的韵味。
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春去来兮
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PostPosted: 2007-03-26 16:21:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢冲浪版主的点评,问好!远握。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-04-19 18:09:00    Post subject: 问好 Reply with quote

不错 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-04-24 04:03:00    Post subject: Re: 问好 Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
不错 Very Happy

感谢少君朋友,问好!
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