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故里春色

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-03-01 15:43:14 Post subject:

鷓鸪天 - 故里春色风弄修篁笛簘声，新荷跳雨碎珠倾。参差翠影通幽径，笑语欢声八角亭。燕翦水，柳娉婷，頑童抛石戏鱼惊。東边日出西边雨，道是无晴却有晴！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
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Posted: 2011-03-02 14:20:55 Post subject:

童年故里春色好，翠柳新荷尽妖娆。童年的回忆总是美好的。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2011-03-02 14:27:35 Post subject:

浮云游子意，万里故乡情。

白云闲人
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Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2011-03-02 17:46:50 Post subject:

黄兄说到了我的心里話：童年的回忆总是美好的！謝謝黄兄！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2011-03-02 17:49:25 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏！游子意，故里情！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

胡恢宗
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Joined: 15 Mar 2008
Posts: 564

胡恢宗Collection

Posted: 2011-03-03 01:13:46 Post subject:

修篁奏笛声，雨跳荷珠坠。笑语欢声八角亭，乡景迷人醉。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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Posted: 2011-03-03 02:58:55 Post subject:

问好老师！读老师词作，真的很享受哦。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-03-03 17:40:36 Post subject:

謝胡恢宗赏评！真的，故里景醉人！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-03-03 17:45:00 Post subject:

謝笑聊鼓励！幕幕春色重溫！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2011-03-24 18:26:16 Post subject:

燕翦水，柳娉婷，頑童抛石戏鱼惊形象生动

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2011-03-27 15:40:08 Post subject:

好词。耐读耐品！

君山楚女
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Posted: 2011-03-27 22:47:57 Post subject:

好词！思念故里，回忆童年，诗怀画意把心灵带进了美好的童话世界。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

君山楚女
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Posted: 2011-03-27 22:48:32 Post subject:

好词！思念故里，回忆童年，诗怀画意把心灵带进了美好的童话世界。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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Posted: 2011-04-02 02:55:43 Post subject:

景情相融问好 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

宁家珍
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Posted: 2011-04-08 23:33:49 Post subject: i健康！

燕翦水，柳娉婷，頑童抛石戏鱼惊。東边日出西边雨，道是无晴却有晴！欣赏好词佳句，问候白云老师。祝身体健康！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-12 01:09:10 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

鷓鸪天 - 故里春色
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呼唤白云老师，致夏安！

老师的这首鹧鸪天，读来真是美不胜收。今日重新翻看，感慨良多、、、、、、

老师原玉：
鷓鸪天 - 故里春色

风弄修篁笛簘声，新荷跳雨碎珠倾。参差翠影通幽径，笑语欢声八角亭。
燕翦水，柳娉婷，頑童抛石戏鱼惊。東边日出西边雨，道是无晴却有晴！

临屏和一首鹧鸪天--想念白云老师

随手填来一首词，风光写尽惹人思。
箫声蕴意悠扬月，曲径通幽画里诗。

春燕掠，柳花飞。白云笔下戏鱼池。
几回梦忆尤清晰，恩重犹如育子师。

借这首鹧鸪天词，表达对老师的想念和呼唤！

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