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鹧鸪天--想念白云老师
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PostPosted: 2011-07-12 01:47:29    Post subject: 鹧鸪天--想念白云老师 Reply with quote

呼唤白云老师,致夏安!

老师的这首鹧鸪天,读来真是美不胜收。今日重新翻看,感慨良多、、、、、、

老师原玉:
鷓鸪天 - 故里春色

风弄修篁笛簘声,新荷跳雨碎珠倾。参差翠影通幽径,笑语欢声八角亭。
燕翦水,柳娉婷,頑童抛石戏鱼惊。東边日出西边雨,道是无晴却有晴!

临屏和一首鹧鸪天--想念白云老师

随手填来一首词,风光写尽惹人思。
箫声蕴意悠扬月,曲径通幽画里诗。

春燕掠,柳花飞。白云笔下戏鱼池。
几回梦忆尤清晰,恩重犹如育子师。

借这首鹧鸪天词,表达对老师的想念和呼唤!
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PostPosted: 2011-07-13 13:29:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

为真诚的友情而感动
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PostPosted: 2011-07-13 20:05:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
为真诚的友情而感动


谢谢白水兄支持!友情万岁!
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PostPosted: 2011-07-13 20:20:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

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春燕掠,柳花飞
翩翩蝶儿戏翠微
雪梅诗韵犹在耳
千草百卉徒芳菲

古为今用,勿套老套 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-07-13 21:07:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

sliu6 wrote:
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春燕掠,柳花飞
翩翩蝶儿戏翠微
雪梅诗韵犹在耳
千草百卉徒芳菲

古为今用,勿套老套

高雅而不落俗套!问好。
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