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长相思 · 陪老伴住院

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Posted: 2011-06-14 01:11:11 Post subject: 长相思 · 陪老伴住院

长相思 · 陪老伴住院妪咽声，翁咽声，引得人间天使迎。浓浓春意生。推一针，吊一针，仍是山重水复形。花从何处明。修改稿椅上哼，榻上哼，牵动悬壶一片情。春光步未停。想天晴，盼天晴，好听蟾宫捣药声。杏林果尚青。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-06-14 06:06:23 Post subject:

住院寻常事，恢宗兄却写得如此传神，如此感人。 “山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村”，祝你老伴早日康复！请老兄也多保重！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-06-14 08:09:40 Post subject:

夫妻情深，跃然纸上。祝恢宗老师老伴早日康复。多多保重！

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Posted: 2011-06-14 15:27:03 Post subject:

祝先生的老伴早日康复！

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Posted: 2011-06-26 06:04:24 Post subject:

谢黄洋界，庆宏，莹雪三位老师的良好祝愿。因整天守在医院，迟复为歉，并向三位问好。在医院闲空时，回味这首词，发觉针字出韵了，所以作了修改，还请老师们指正。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-06-26 14:24:06 Post subject: 和恢宗兄《长相思•陪老伴住院》

胡恢宗 wrote:

长相思 · 陪老伴住院
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和恢宗兄《长相思•陪老伴住院》（中华新韵）

妻有情，夫有情，情到耆年色更浓。牵肠挂肚中。
左一声，右一声，病榻旁边百事恭。心头有盏灯。

祝嫂夫人早日恢复健康！

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Posted: 2011-06-27 03:58:27 Post subject:

感人肺腑！问候胡兄！祝福你的老伴早日康复！

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Posted: 2011-06-27 18:56:01 Post subject:

愿天下人人健康快乐！

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Posted: 2011-07-05 14:32:25 Post subject:

感人肠腑之情，浪子也祝嫂夫人早日安慷！ _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

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Posted: 2011-07-05 20:16:23 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

长相思 · 陪老伴住院
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动人之作，愿嫂夫人早日康复。

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