影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2011-07-08 03:58:20 Post subject: 五律•月兰会（新韵） |
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五律•月兰会（新韵）
天藏梭子月，何以吻纱窗？
花立书桌久，香拥蝶梦长。
翩翩遗阆苑，寂寂履尘邦。
透过心相语，含情一夜光。
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2011-07-08 04:26:09 Post subject: |
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天藏梭子月，何以吻纱窗？
花立书桌久，香拥蝶梦长。
翩翩遗阆苑，寂寂履尘邦。
透过心相语，含情一夜光。
特别喜欢“花立书桌久，香拥蝶梦长。 ”拟人手法独到。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2011-07-08 08:02:20 Post subject: |
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天藏梭子月，何以吻纱窗？
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与笑聊兄同感。 |
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冰清
同进士出身
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| Posted: 2011-07-08 11:34:25 Post subject: |
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很别致的构思。赞个：
唯有多情天上月，
含灵脉脉入窗来。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
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| Posted: 2011-07-08 18:24:59 Post subject: |
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| “花立书桌久”的确很美。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2011-07-09 03:27:10 Post subject: |
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谢谢朋友们阅读
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2011-07-09 05:32:48 Post subject: |
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花立书桌久，香拥蝶梦长。
令人神往。学习问好。
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