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七律-游子情和冰清老师《游子之歌》

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Posted: 2011-07-08 03:52:18 Post subject: 七律-游子情和冰清老师《游子之歌》

文/笑聊读冰清老师《游子之歌》再三，游子心情深深感知，临屏依韵和上一首七律-游子情月光柔洒影婆娑，碧玉湖塘嫩粉荷。一别家园多少载？重逢梦里几回疴? 思乡异国艰难路，怀古他邦困苦磨。今日举杯眸远酹，风情万语寄江河。

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Posted: 2011-07-08 03:59:04 Post subject:

游子心情深深见 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2011-07-08 08:07:33 Post subject:

万里天涯路，千般游子情。

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Posted: 2011-07-08 12:18:30 Post subject:

谢谢笑版深情相和！ “一别家园多少载？重逢梦里几回疴?” --- 情敬情切矣！感动。我拟今年底回国小住。若你明年春夏之交来加和北美诗友相聚，我应该能赶上盛会！

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Posted: 2011-07-09 03:11:41 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

游子心情深深见

谢寒水兄赏评！

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Posted: 2011-07-09 03:13:49 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

万里天涯路，千般游子情。

谢庆宏兄赏评！问夏安。

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Posted: 2011-07-09 03:29:49 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

谢谢笑版深情相和！
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冰清老师夏安！

深谢老师赏评！

得悉老师年底回国，届时如适宜，可拜访老师！

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Posted: 2011-07-09 05:38:38 Post subject:

思乡异国艰难路，怀古他邦困苦磨。今日举杯眸远酹，风情万语寄江河。游子深情，感人肺腑。向兄问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-09 16:40:58 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

思乡异国艰难路，怀古他邦困苦磨。
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谢谢恢宗兄台赏评！问好。

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Posted: 2011-07-09 17:37:57 Post subject:

游子千里路，网络万首诗

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Posted: 2011-07-10 03:00:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

游子千里路，网络万首诗 Very Happy

谢谢白水兄雅评！夏安！

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