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TORONTO GREETINGS (3)
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PostPosted: 2011-03-19 07:27:57    Post subject: TORONTO GREETINGS (3) Reply with quote

TORONTO GREETINGS (3)

白水为听云老师回多伦多接风有感而作

探寻越南华侨辛酸履历
仿佛倒流了三十年时间
听云听风听雨入扣丝丝
松枫录下一腔苦涩语言

无限青春无怨无悔消逝
小城枕着安湖波涛入眠
岁月沧桑丢下艰难记忆
留着风霜雨雪串串连连

春天迈着脚步轻快呼吸
加拿大鹅伴着祝福和弦
阳光掏出快乐温暖纸笔
时空穿越四季变换容颜

玻璃窗前月亮牵动心田
歌声飘逸悠扬回荡耳边

March 14,2011,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)00:00-1:00 am
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PostPosted: 2011-03-19 07:30:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

南河书院
南河诗话

诗作感于一对来自越南的华侨夫妇讲述的逃难故事
比较近日利比亚动荡中国政府派船只接回本国公民
与几十年前中越边境战起后越南排华所带来的磨难
深深感到祖籍国之强大对海外华人的影响与重要性

韵脚abab abab abab bb
诗行采用5音步的节奏
各段以唐之韵起承转合
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PostPosted: 2011-03-19 11:25:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

南河诗作,形式创新,音节铿锵,诗情丰富。欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-20 18:20:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的尝试,东西方文化的对接
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PostPosted: 2011-03-21 10:34:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

听云听风听雨入扣丝丝
松枫录下一腔苦涩语言


想像自然出奇,迭配铿锵有力。
“入扣丝丝”,倒转一下,何如?
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PostPosted: 2011-07-03 04:37:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好黄洋界白水冰清,长周末快乐!

七绝 国庆长周末寄赠

日子流声夏至忙,
忙来忘却百花香。
香随城市风飘过,
过往游人十四行。

July 3,2011,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)8:00-8:30 am
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