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〖金金作品〗诗两首

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Posted: 2011-04-22 21:36:28 Post subject: 〖金金作品〗诗两首

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Posted: 2011-07-11 02:37:30 Post subject:

金金朋友你好！诗两首已读，只是非律非古如何评？至少用韵要一致哦！

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