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PostPosted: 2011-07-12 23:11:11    Post subject: 關關 Reply with quote

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傍晚,水龍頭下
你詩經般地洗著芹菜
我踱步中庭
把菸斗抽成絕句。
盤中飧,筷子輕犁──
那年,我們在田埂相遇
靑色的草與紅色的太陽
風似合身的衣裳
長短如詞一般恰當
我越嚼越慢
我想:女人是男人最好的伴侶
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PostPosted: 2011-07-15 14:12:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

古意新芽,化典为诗。
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PostPosted: 2011-07-15 16:56:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

很诗情的。
只结尾淡了,个见,问好。
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