影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-23 02:43:19 Post subject: 七律•经年感怀步韵沙洲(新韵) |
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七律•经年感怀步韵沙洲(新韵)
过膝始信江湖险,入世经年几度秋。
逝水无涯何摆渡,蒙冲有限枉翘头。
显将大梦醪中寄,隐作小资诗外游。
哪日识得知己甚,猜枚分韵赌生愁。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-25 01:49:17 Post subject: |
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影沉寒水 wrote: |
七律•经年感怀步韵沙洲(新韵)
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寒水兄诗写得味道纯正。学习了。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-25 03:28:50 Post subject: |
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好文笔,欣赏 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2011-06-25 05:35:12 Post subject: |
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欣赏。 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-26 06:13:41 Post subject: |
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谢谢朋友们阅读 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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