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让池塘为我画一轮圆月
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PostPosted: 2011-06-12 17:45:44    Post subject: 让池塘为我画一轮圆月 Reply with quote

月被端出来,放在天上,就是让人画的。
有人用眼睛画,画月的清辉,画月的高高在上,像一个飞翔的天使,飞过她目光的梢头,飞过她梦的山梁。
有人用心画,画月的东升西落,阴晴圆缺,在每个制高点上,涨满思念的圆魄。
更多的人用诗吃画,不管画得多朦胧,多唯美,多变化万端,多有诗情画意,但都属于我的后来。
在此之前,月一再被外婆豁牙的嘴画过,那是不关风的童话;被母亲纳凉时低声的哼唱画过,那是一个孩子心里对一个光明洞口,毫无理性的遐想和冲动。
除此而外,还有多少画月的方式,我没有细想过、深思过。很长一段时日,我一直独爱让池塘为我画一轮圆月。
那池塘是我老屋边的池塘,那圆月是我少年头上的圆月。
那池塘像一真张纸铺开,纸是清纸,平平整整;像一卷帛展开,帛是绸帛,细腻柔软。无论画什么都清晰,只需轻轻一点,轮廓都力透纸背,力透帛背,深入纹理,素净生辉。或者像卷轴打开,四周之景早已勾好,譬如三两间老屋,五六株杨柳,几亩稻田,一条通往村外的小路,几处洗衣的石阶。中间则空着,偶尔有几根水草,一茎小荷,一棵菱菜,谦逊逊的,胆怯怯的,单等主景到来,单等圆月一点。
月一点,画面就活了,就有了光亮,有了生机,有了动态。倘若风添几笔,便有了道道涟漪;屋、树、花添几笔,就有了淡墨的倒影。倘若我来添一笔,无论放在哪,似乎都在池塘之画构思之外,是不为人注意的闲笔。
池塘将月画出了蓝天的深度,宇宙的深度,我一眼就能看出,但不曾抵达,也永远不能抵达。它只能是我心底完美的幻影。
池塘将月画得波澜不惊,画得浑然一体,一切都是象外,一切都是点缀。
倘若池塘画月真有象外,我便是一根线条,一幅构图,一个静物,曾在它临摹的视野之内,取景的范围之内,而今早成了异数。
倘若池塘画月真有点缀,我不如水,能给它点缀灵感;不如蛙,能给它点缀寂寞;不如萤火,能给它点缀亮色。
我不如春夜猝然而至的闪电,霍然拉开黑幕,发现池塘的焦虑,和它可怕的幽深。我不如浮云,悬挂在村庄的头顶,悬挂在往事的头顶,轻轻投影便抵达池塘的肺腑。
我只能让池塘为我画一轮圆月,而今,我早已丧失这样的资格。但我还能抱住回想,回想是一盆好火,能烘熟一个人内心的寒冷。

二0一一年六月五日于霞蔚居
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PostPosted: 2011-06-13 17:50:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意的情绪,又有散文诗的语调。学习,问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-07-02 04:15:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

读君的文字,是一种享受。。。。
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PostPosted: 2011-07-08 10:48:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情,月色,相拥着!
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