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当你老了
苏枍北
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PostPosted: 2011-06-11 21:53:52    Post subject: 当你老了 Reply with quote


当你老了 
 ---致爱人
  作者:苏枍北

  当你老了,我会用温暖
  熨平你沧桑的皱纹,轻轻撩起你苍然白发,亲吻你额头
  让你斑白的鬓拂过缕缕暖流
  让萌动的激情,亦如当年
  恍若倾听你年轻时动听的歌喉
  和穿过你的黑发的我的手

  我爱云游,爱在湖光山色中徜徉
  当你老了,远离俗事喧嚣牵我一双手
  一起跋涉远方,观望云海,翘首日出,攀爬到巅峰
  任时光之旅载着我们回到群山遨游

  当你老了,尽管步履蹒跚
  我依然深爱着你
  任岁月的苔痕覆满你沧桑额头
  我依然呵护在你身旁,一无所求

  当你老了,深爱着我的人呵
  为你折一枝绿柳编织成冠,再来一回返老还童的畅游
  让优美深沉的诗句诠释我们一生的爱意

  当你老了,我也老了,
  我能想到最浪漫的事,就是守护着你
  让曾经热烈的诗句,滚烫在你的手掌中
  陪你品读甜蜜,如品读一个刚刚开始的来世
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子在川上曰
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PostPosted: 2011-06-12 20:06:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

  当你老了,我也老了,
  我能想到最浪漫的事,就是守护着你
  让曾经热烈的诗句,滚烫在你的手掌中
  陪你品读甜蜜,如品读一个刚刚开始的来世
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吟啸徐行
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Location: 中国安徽
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PostPosted: 2011-06-13 17:38:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

又一种风格,又一种以情动人的佳作:《当你老了》。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2011-06-13 21:34:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

感动!
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