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蜘蛛八卦

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Posted: 2011-06-01 09:16:15 Post subject: 蜘蛛八卦

蜘蛛八卦走出後門後院的橘樹間有一張蜘蛛網掛在那裡我說了很九要寫一首蜘蛛八卦卦, 掛也。碰上蜘蛛八隻腳，剛好它的那張網捕獲了很多事件有的已經消化有的懸而未決佈下的網，現在有斷有連我想那是陰爻與陽爻觀念的化身吧我用詩人的方式與它對視，然後退回屋裡不敢打擾它它是當今文王自拘而演 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2011-06-01 12:43:20 Post subject:

它是當今文王自拘而演渐入佳境 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

博弈
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Posted: 2011-06-01 22:07:42 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

這詩未在傳統的詩的內容上下功夫.
形式的創作概念是把後設語言帶入詩.
真正的詩內容反而沒寫. 文快收而希望
帶起那未寫詩文的聯想. 詩如此設計的.
但這些前因與後設也可引起詩意, 我想.

當然, 尾段也可看有調侃諷刺的地方, 或不想看八卦文章(不敢打擾它)
或編寫八卦的(自拘而演)自然是文王(記者, 編輯, 文章之王).
或也有"我不風景誰風景"的意味, "化身", "對視"後, 人如蜘蛛, 退回步出之處所,
詩人的幽居仿佛就是文王演易, 不必真"帝出於震", 繞那一圈八卦.
從哪時候起, 詩人老愛用'對視'二字的說法(明明就是看到罷了 Laughing

)
然以上只是後設的後設, 不是個人. 還是回到善良正面的解讀較好, 尊重蜘蛛結網.
合併成文吧. Mr. Green

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叶英儿
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Posted: 2011-06-02 16:16:27 Post subject:

好诗。

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