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5月19日游绍兴
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PostPosted: 2011-05-26 22:11:14    Post subject: 5月19日游绍兴 Reply with quote

5月19日游绍兴


1、兰亭

让我们把一张白纸轻轻摊开
这里摆一块奇石
那儿添一丛脩竹
王兄,我已不胜酒力
请举起清泉一杯
曲水流觞
让我们先仰天
再俯首
这一仰一俯
就是千年啊
而酒杯还留在我的手心
余温尚存
尚存的还有
青山绿水之间的我
脚底之下
最后哪一点
墨迹



2、东湖

那箬篑山像是假山
那东湖水似乎也是假水
我独爱这微风
轻轻拂过的水莲
花间亭亭玉立的人儿
微微向前,开口:
陶朱公,怎么才回来呢您
那幽怨,仿佛积累了有两千年
我便伸手过去
而接回来的
惟有这一潭深深又浅浅的伤痕
又传了回去



3、沈园

爱不可圆
词不再填
我寻遍每一个角落而不遇
天亦太晴
花亦太艳
唯独一只小小的黄裳翠鸟哪声声啼哭

这时,有一层青烟浮起
我便循声探去
忽然错失一足
错、错、错
我就错到了
这个错得不能再错的园子里

只见游人如鲫
并争相与我合影留念



4、三味书屋

我是来寻找
哪一个人的足音

窗外,我侧耳
倾听一株腊梅

听到的声音是多么熟悉
甚至错觉

这里面一定有我的布鞋
这外面一定有我的长衫



5、百草园

数过来,缺了一种
数过去,又缺了一种
谁把我的岁月偷走了

忽然又觉得,所剩下的
都不是自己的
我为什么要坚持呢

这偌大的园子
数到最后,只剩下
一个孤独的影子
伴着蛐蛐的叫声


6、秋瑾故居

我是打老远来的
带来一束鲜花——象征爱情
一叠纸钱——可以买来幸福
还有三柱香——我要点燃些什么呢

但您为您所爱
而更爱
一把精致的小手枪
一对英姿飒飒的长剑
还有后院的那一束星星草

哦,我就要离您而去
你便有些不舍
有些依依地将星星草洒向了湖面
哦,那宇宙深处传回来的
一闪一闪的
星星之火
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PostPosted: 2011-05-27 02:19:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这种别样的表达!

——到贵州来吗??
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PostPosted: 2011-05-27 02:42:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

来中国了呀。真好。白水一起来了没有呀?如果有空就来我们这里玩吧。 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2011-05-27 05:03:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢山城与一品红老师

只在广州与浙江一游,已回加拿大
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PostPosted: 2011-05-28 06:01:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

桃花大岛主也来广州和西湖了 Shocked
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PostPosted: 2011-05-28 06:03:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

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感谢山城与一品红老师

只在广州与浙江一游,已回加拿大



没来深圳

闲了三个月

5月19日正好上班

我在车上读《绍兴印象》

为了写小说《诗人》

桃花岛主正拜访绍兴
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PostPosted: 2011-05-29 04:23:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

助兴!问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-05-29 07:24:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

再回国就到贵州一游罢!!
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PostPosted: 2011-05-29 16:43:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢少君与山城子老师
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PostPosted: 2011-05-29 17:29:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛主写的这几个地方都还没去过。以后有机会要游一游。 Smile
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PostPosted: 2011-05-30 04:59:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
感谢山城与一品红老师

只在广州与浙江一游,已回加拿大

遗憾!以后有机会的时候再来玩吧
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PostPosted: 2011-05-30 05:47:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛兄鹄游一趟,如游邻家小院,舒服啊。
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PostPosted: 2011-05-30 20:14:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

王兄,我已不胜酒力
请举起清泉一杯
曲水流觞


借花献佛,也敬王兄一杯。为他们给炎黄子孙留下的墨迹。
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PostPosted: 2011-05-31 08:26:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

3、沈园

爱不可圆
词不再填
我寻遍每一个角落而不遇
天亦太晴
花亦太艳
唯独一只小小的黄裳翠鸟哪声声啼哭

这时,有一层青烟浮起
我便循声探去
忽然错失一足
错、错、错
我就错到了
这个错得不能再错的园子里

只见游人如鲫
并争相与我合影留念


妙诗诗秒 与众不同。
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PostPosted: 2011-05-31 16:16:14    Post subject: 上传几张相关的图片 Reply with quote

兰亭:





东湖:





沈园:






三味书屋:





秋瑾故居:



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PostPosted: 2011-05-31 17:21:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

很蕴藉的表达,很惬意的浙江一游,羡慕和平岛老师。
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