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种月亮

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Posted: 2011-03-14 16:35:32 Post subject: 种月亮

《种月亮》人家都种太阳可我种月亮种在我的后花园里让它发芽放叶成长春姑娘捧来溪水白鸽衔来阳光轻轻地放在荷叶上唱着童谣把月牙送到梦乡潮汐唤醒我的月亮我坐在它的目光里抚摸着清秀的脸庞栏栅上的柳枝剪开了暮霭池塘里装满了我的月光小草摇着头脚步轻盈欢畅我的月亮爬到床上洗去红绸的羞涩把灯光掩藏夜里的箫音挂着洁白飞出了院墙 2011年3月14日 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2011-03-17 02:54:10 Post subject:

比较细腻和优美。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2011-03-17 21:51:16 Post subject:

很浪漫，欣赏了！祝好

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Posted: 2011-03-17 23:12:12 Post subject:

谢谢各位老师的光临。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2011-04-04 13:17:12 Post subject:

喜欢浪漫手笔，欣赏文思意境... 拜读佳篇！早安！

低处的迷雾
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Posted: 2011-04-04 15:22:57 Post subject:

很美很曼妙悠然。 _________________ 写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-04-05 02:28:07 Post subject:

谢谢东方老师的欣赏，问安！ _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2011-04-05 02:29:52 Post subject:

谢谢低处的迷雾的光临，问安！ _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2011-04-05 09:10:24 Post subject:

唱着童谣把月牙送到梦乡

杨海军
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Posted: 2011-04-06 02:34:32 Post subject:

诗的感觉越来越好了。问好！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2011-04-06 04:09:37 Post subject: 写的真好。

写的真好。

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Posted: 2011-04-07 19:58:49 Post subject:

谢谢白水、海军、叶英儿，感谢各位的光临，祝各位安康！ _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2011-04-09 01:38:40 Post subject:

可爱而优美，种呀种呀种月亮～ _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2011-04-10 03:02:10 Post subject:

谢谢晴宝老师的光临！问安！ _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2011-04-29 14:22:01 Post subject:

开花了我就去看。顺便看看你 _________________ 借助诗歌，努力把自己活成一棵树，白天向上，夜里向下．

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Posted: 2011-05-01 04:41:28 Post subject:

看题目，就很诗意。

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Posted: 2011-05-21 05:59:21 Post subject:

谢谢郭秀才光临寒舍，唐婉在这里恭候大驾了！ _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2011-05-21 06:01:53 Post subject:

谢谢赵探花的夸奖，我会继续努力。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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