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《天香》（外一首）
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PostPosted: 2011-04-24 06:01:57    Post subject: 《天香》（外一首） Reply with quote
《天香》
文／晴宝儿

亲爱，我还在念着你的亲爱
湖水未满，云袅袅

走过麓湖，杜湖我们在水面绣花朵易逝的水波
水边依然年轻
月光照着大朵金边的银箔

那一世，一抬眼
云正感伤，湖又深了许多鱼的长度

我们老得像妖精
鱼都长满胡须，掐在时光上的那朵一点都没远
一点都没蒙尘

2011-3-23

《寻找乌比》

北方夜，春寒往骨头里钻
多适宜，游荡的人敲旅馆的门深夜一豆灯光
寻找乌比

紫苜蓿紫台灯紫色花星星点点
莫莉，莫莉，天光澄明你望向无边和爱的眼神
紫色乌比

我不说人鬼情未了
不说修女也疯狂，我在巡游的路途
听凭心灵的指引

2011-3-24
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PostPosted: 2011-04-27 18:28:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
耐读！！
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PostPosted: 2011-04-28 17:50:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
宝儿，这两首写的胆大而灵性。 喜欢
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PostPosted: 2011-04-29 01:49:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
山城子 wrote:
耐读！！


先生好,感谢先生品读；）
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PostPosted: 2011-04-29 01:55:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
宝儿，这两首写的胆大而灵性。 喜欢


感谢白水亲哈，亲见笑，多多批评；）
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PostPosted: 2011-05-04 14:26:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
一组耐人寻味的好诗！祝好！！
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PostPosted: 2011-05-08 18:55:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
在你的节奏里美着，修着绝世艳丽。
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PostPosted: 2011-05-09 09:45:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
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一组耐人寻味的好诗！祝好！！


感谢诗人，多多批评，问候；）
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PostPosted: 2011-05-09 09:46:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
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在你的节奏里美着，修着绝世艳丽。


谢谢金金，多多批评，问候；）
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