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五趾襪
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PostPosted: 2011-04-19 06:09:25    Post subject: 五趾襪 Reply with quote

五趾襪

走路的時候
感覺神秘跟蹤
經過不斷的練習
我已經很會穿五趾襪
一字一字的五言句

穿的時候每個趾頭
儘量張開套進就容易
每一個都要包住
像貓兒伸懶腰
拉長再收回
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2011-04-19 21:10:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈的东东,嘿嘿~~~总让人忍俊不住!!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-19 22:31:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言上还需要提炼
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2011-04-23 16:45:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

叙说、比喻和暗讽。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-23 17:02:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢趾教; 我来自说自话。
一段是左脚,二段是右脚,咱的脚食趾较长(不好意思太过象形);
总共十个脚趾,穿上后两脚掌鼓掌,啪啪。五趾袜有对仗哦:

走路的時候 <-->拉長再收回
感覺神秘跟蹤 <--> 像貓兒伸懶腰
......
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走路的時候
感覺神秘跟蹤
經過不斷的練習
我已經很會穿五趾襪
一字一字的五言句

穿的時候每個趾頭
儘量張開套進就容易
每一個都要包住
像貓兒伸懶腰
拉長再收回
_________________
(在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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