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恰似你的温柔

zhangmin
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Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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Posted: 2007-03-21 19:21:58 Post subject: 恰似你的温柔

柔凉的风吹过撩动着我的窗帘一泻幽幽的光华在我床上温柔的扫描宁静的夜晚你的魂好象一丝云漂浮在我的心田不管多么寒冷永远是春天般的长梦冷风长秋雨犹如你吐出的缠绵我数着落叶寄托思念在叶的水珠上读你的柔情你属于我的夜属于我独自的宁静你的牵挂在燃烧我是你创造的另一个太阳中国.江苏.张敏

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-03-21 20:42:47 Post subject:

你属于我的夜属于我独自的宁静你的牵挂在燃烧我是你创造的另一个太阳 ....结尾还可,可以婉转些.

刘芸
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Posted: 2007-03-23 06:08:30 Post subject:

缠绵情深的命题，问好． _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

zhangmin
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
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Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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Posted: 2007-03-25 20:58:43 Post subject:

刘芸 wrote:

缠绵情深的命题，问好．

谢谢,问好
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