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胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-08 01:27:00 Post subject: 赤枣子 · 咏红梅

赤枣子 · 咏红梅月夜静，鹤难眠。清寒神醉令人怜。冰蕊暗香浮雪后，孤山处士叩心弦。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

东北诗弦
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Posted: 2011-04-08 04:50:12 Post subject:

冰蕊暗香浮雪后，孤山处士叩心弦。佳句 _________________ 但觉高歌有鬼神，焉知饿死填沟壑？

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-04-08 06:34:53 Post subject:

夜静难眠，“处士”可有弦外之音？ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

清水正夫
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Posted: 2011-04-08 18:05:03 Post subject:

贺恢宗兄八十寿诞，且祝：诗情如火，笔健似椽。

宁家珍
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Posted: 2011-04-08 23:30:05 Post subject:

月夜静，鹤难眠。清寒神醉令人怜。冰蕊暗香浮雪后，孤山处士叩心弦。欣赏好词，问候恢宗诗友。

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-14 03:54:38 Post subject:

谢东北诗弦阅读。问好。谢清水正夫的祝福。也祝您健、愉快；并感谢您的鼓励。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-14 04:03:11 Post subject:

谢黄洋界老师的阅评。本词有暗咏林逋梅妻鹤子之事。故前有鹤难眠，结句指明孤山处士。看来拙作还有待斟酌。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-14 04:04:05 Post subject:

谢黄洋界老师的阅评。本词有暗咏林逋梅妻鹤子之事。故前有鹤难眠，结句指明孤山处士。看来拙作还有待斟酌。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-14 04:10:22 Post subject:

谢家珍诗友赏读，向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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