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《欲借木笔扫残秋》
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PostPosted: 2011-03-31 00:17:35    Post subject: 《欲借木笔扫残秋》 Reply with quote

欲借木笔扫残秋
文/殷晓媛

狂人阔袖里舞着毛笔,眉头飞扬
像一弯溪水经过秋天的山峦,冲开枫叶
和槭叶的金鳞,写一笔冰封林海,写一笔
寂山冷雪,写到天青雁低,墨迹在山脊上枯干
断裂,散落成百里寒塘的青绿树桩,此时
便笔秃韵尽,狂人背负夜色

逃出一幅山水,降临于一条北国的街。光的流线如丝
千回百折,一群夜半的燕子
带走夜空黑色素的残片,淡绿的穿堂风
从大楼间俯冲而下。这城是一张
伪装起来的泥金宣,薄而均匀的地面下
金色的羽毛被春的气息吹起,贴着石榴裙下的小腿
或者戴机械表的手腕,落下一个个
波澜不惊的压角章。古典笔画的鞭子
驱赶着道旁的火红桃花,那是两笔
苍劲的中锋。狂人有些眼花缭乱,他需要
一支新笔,他拔下一枝紫玉兰,花蕾

如簪起的狼毫,丝丝耀人。他唤
它的乳名:木笔。他将扛着它
重返秋日旷野,扫尽红叶,高吟一段
恶紫夺朱。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-04 15:28:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

动感十足,很有气息。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-04 17:05:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

如簪起的狼毫,丝丝耀人。他唤
它的乳名:木笔。他将扛着它
重返秋日旷野,扫尽红叶,高吟一段
恶紫夺朱。

一直喜欢你的诗歌。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-04 18:34:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

低处的迷雾 wrote:
动感十足,很有气息。


谢谢诗友评读
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PostPosted: 2011-04-04 18:37:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

子在川上曰 wrote:
如簪起的狼毫,丝丝耀人。他唤
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承蒙抬爱,荣幸。远握
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