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流动的心
zhangmin
秀才


Joined: 13 Mar 2007
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Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 19:17:27    Post subject: 流动的心 Reply with quote

漫步初冬的晨光
流动着温暖的遐想
祈祷没有醒的梦
归雁思念传递的季节

踩着脚下的曙光
拾起最后一片落叶
将秋林装进心中
那是绿叶疲惫的梦境

孤独的白云
在寂寞时仰望蓝天
学会消极中生存
期盼幸运的仙鹤光临

捧一颗流动的心
走进有笑声的角落
有了哭泣才痛快
缘分注定消失的眷恋
中国.江苏.张敏
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 20:50:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以深入和婉转的表达.效果更好.
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