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(原创)春雨之二
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 02:21:10    Post subject: (原创)春雨之二 Reply with quote

(原创)春雨之二
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开春的雨水
顺着肩膀丝丝滑落
鱼在浅滩的草丛中
兴风作浪
扑哧哧的水花
搅乱了夜的宁静

水面真实而丰盈
芦丛中一两只倦宿的鸟
凄凉的呼叫
穿透了时而飘忽时而游荡的薄雾
根或者种子在夜的深处毫无顾忌
欲望随风弥漫

一些娇羞的心事
被谁一一点破

通联:243100安徽省当涂县文化局
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 05:21:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

画面感很强。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 16:14:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢沙斑竹鼓励,多批。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 02:52:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

请各位斑竹、师友多批呵。
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