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[原创]冬夜想你
常建世
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 06:09:29    Post subject: [原创]冬夜想你 Reply with quote

孤寂包抄而来时

你沉沦在我酒的底部

思念换挡加速时

你活跃在我失眠的深处

你呀你 你这个狡猾的小狐狸

我今生的恋人前世的冤家

你让我天天捏着梦的尾巴

却始终见不到你的芳影

你这小冤家你这小狐狸

你说 你说

在这远隔千里的他乡冬夜想你

再厚的被子又怎么能

盖得住我一身的寒冷
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下一个偶像是野兽
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下一个偶像是野兽Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-21 11:08:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

孤寂包抄而来时

你沉沦在我酒的底部

思念换挡加速时

你活跃在我失眠的深处
----------------------------读来有味道
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 17:21:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢过下一个偶像是野兽的评读并问好!
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