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《梦里江南》
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PostPosted: 2011-03-09 00:30:19    Post subject: 《梦里江南》 Reply with quote

《梦里江南》



四月的火车 爬在油菜的田埂上

收了满车的花香和蜜蜂的歌唱

翠竹里的炊烟也开始了向往

沿着彩虹走进了山庄



我祈盼的心 焦急了天空 它们

洒下了丝丝细语 把你的思念

送到了我的耳旁



我打开车窗 寻找热烈的呼唤

雨中花折伞里的张望 飞到了我的身旁

相偎的背影消失在幽静的小巷

从此 在长满青苔的石阶上 两双

轻盈的脚印 把他们温暖的小床丈量



葱郁的小溪旁 捡几片碎阳光

放在我的行囊里 让它慢慢成长

借来一朵莲 把爱存放 让它

扎根 怒放在你的梦乡



北方的思念 剪断我疾飞的翅膀

在你眷恋的目光里我 扬帆起航

泪水泛起的波涛 载我的裙裾回乡

把莲子种在你的身上







写于2011年3月8日
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PostPosted: 2011-03-09 00:34:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

我好象去了动画片里的美景中!!:)
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PostPosted: 2011-03-09 00:43:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师的光临指导!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-09 16:13:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

慧,好。 建议把婉去了,贵在自信
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PostPosted: 2011-03-10 01:18:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!
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