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〖金金作品〗一圈小维纳斯围着水仙花飞舞

金金
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Posted: 2011-03-03 01:33:56 Post subject: 〖金金作品〗一圈小维纳斯围着水仙花飞舞

《一圈小维纳斯围着水仙花飞舞》水仙花盆放在阳台上，对准云的边缘我坐在阳台里，阳光沉下来我需要阳光，我把头伸过去，闭上眼在中午耳鸣，阳光太好了昨天雪还没化风提醒我，这是在春天的三月初阴影提醒我，依然很冷中午突然到了下午拿着水杯走向阳台，就象走向夏天三月已来临，我仰面，白云和太阳—— 辉煌地西行—— 2011年3月3日 14时27分成诗 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2011-03-03 19:05:47 Post subject:

强烈的画面感衬托着诗人真实的情绪

金金
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Posted: 2011-03-04 00:01:00 Post subject:

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Posted: 2011-03-04 08:47:41 Post subject:

辉煌地西行 good. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2011-03-09 05:18:17 Post subject: 。

好。真有点意识流。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

金金
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Posted: 2011-03-09 23:45:32 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

好。真有点意识流。

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