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逛春

骨笛
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Joined: 03 Jan 2009
Posts: 547

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Posted: 2011-03-18 00:44:06 Post subject: 逛春

这样的时光许多树，微风细雨一群鸟儿，余音袅袅处湮没了飞影我站在滹沱河的南岸看看对岸吞食了许多草舍的城市重重地重重地，僵立而它的触觉还在萌芽那里有我一盏小小的台灯数着日子天天数，天天数数或许，就是永恒? 站在青草的岸边感觉房间，街头就是一段没有谱曲的思绪寂寂无语庆幸这次逃离还能觅到些嫩绿的瘦影多多少少，还有几滴雨 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
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Posted: 2011-03-18 02:29:29 Post subject:

这首诗很不错。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2011-03-18 16:19:13 Post subject:

含蓄，诗意而张弛有度。

上城
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Joined: 15 Mar 2007
Posts: 2024
Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
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Posted: 2011-04-27 08:32:59 Post subject:

问好。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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