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七律：别样海棠——和青鸟依依同题

山城子
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Posted: 2011-03-04 19:55:27 Post subject: 七律：别样海棠——和青鸟依依同题

七律：别样海棠——和青鸟依依同题文/ 山城子春浓故地叶青青，日照棠湖水微风。朵朵绽放红一片，枝枝缠绕紫千层。双流借问谁家女，孤渡喜言锦官城。单叶木舟漂哪里，琵琶未老觅乡情。 2011-3-4于上海附：七律：别样海棠文/ 青鸟依依新棠万树已葱笼，一片烟霞映日红。唯痛暖流吹瓣落，难描清韵坠枝空。千重颜色蓉城外，十里馨香瞿水中。赏罢花仙归去问，来年几度醉春风？ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2011-03-05 04:08:00 Post subject:

唱和俱佳，欣赏再次。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-03-05 04:48:02 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

唱和俱佳，欣赏再次。

谢谢胡恢宗！！
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Posted: 2011-03-05 06:19:13 Post subject:

写的是蓉城风光啊。

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Posted: 2011-03-05 06:33:41 Post subject:

锦城春色来天地，“来年几度醉春风”，欣赏唱和之作。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-03-05 21:52:50 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

写的是蓉城风光啊。

问好H!!_是熔城风光！！
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Posted: 2011-03-05 21:54:57 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

写的是蓉城风光啊。

问好H!!_是熔城风光！！

问好黄版！！
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Posted: 2011-03-05 21:55:43 Post subject:

改：春浓故地叶青青，日照棠湖水戏风。朵朵绽放红欲坠，枝枝缠绕紫千层。双流借问谁家女，孤渡欢言在锦城。单叶木舟漂哪里，古筝未老是乡情。 2011-3-5于上海 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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