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多雨的季节
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PostPosted: 2007-03-25 22:26:19    Post subject: 多雨的季节 Reply with quote

你是寒流
用潮湿的指尖
抚摸我红扑扑的脸
在羞涩中颤抖

窗前的迷茫
剪不断理还乱
我象角落的蔷薇
在雨中
有我听不完的唠叨
那是你寄托季节
给我的思念

屋檐下
你送给我的风铃
牵动相思
在飘过来的烟雾里
哭泣

多雨的季节
你总想牵着我的手
走进原野
融入我们理想的坟茔
中国.江苏.张敏
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PostPosted: 2007-03-25 23:16:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

结尾有了变化。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-26 16:49:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

希望多指点哦,问好.
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