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小诗一首

蓝天李梦
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Posted: 2011-02-20 06:31:14 Post subject: 小诗一首

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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2011-02-20 19:59:36 Post subject:

好诗！！！具象的好！！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2011-02-20 20:00:13 Post subject:

我加精了！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

唐慧
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Joined: 01 Jul 2010
Posts: 187
Location: 中国吉林
唐慧Collection

Posted: 2011-02-21 02:04:21 Post subject:

真的好，拜读学习了。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

吟啸徐行
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Joined: 03 May 2008
Posts: 1336
Location: 中国安徽
吟啸徐行Collection

Posted: 2011-02-21 03:56:51 Post subject:

颇有五四时期新诗清新之风！ _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2011-02-21 22:15:12 Post subject: 家境

很好。同意加精！欣赏！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

蓝天李梦
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Joined: 12 Jun 2010
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Posted: 2011-02-22 22:06:12 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

好诗！！！具象的好！！！！！

谢谢老师！

蓝天李梦
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Posted: 2011-02-22 22:07:08 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

我加精了！！！！

谢谢鼓励！祝好！

蓝天李梦
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Posted: 2011-02-22 22:08:14 Post subject:

唐慧 wrote:

真的好，拜读学习了。

谢谢老师！

蓝天李梦
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Posted: 2011-02-22 22:09:20 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

很好。同意加精！欣赏！

问候韩老师！

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