胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
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Posted: 2011-02-27 17:26:01 Post subject: 踏莎行 · 童年的苦难 |
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看到诗友们写欢乐的童年,勾起了我对童年苦难的回忆,便也写
了几句,算是别具一格吧!
踏莎行 · 童年的苦难
衡岳沦亡,柳州滥炸,身逢国难魂惊吓。尤悲慈
母目难瞑,泪盈稚子阑干下。 官佐狂逃,军民倾
轧,哀鸿惨状难描画。而今紫气己东来,斜阳更是情
无价。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
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Posted: 2011-02-27 18:57:41 Post subject: |
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而今紫气己东来,斜阳更是情无价。
忆当年,乐如今,斜阳紫气满前川。祝恢宗兄晚年幸福! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-27 20:18:58 Post subject: |
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与老山兄同感,夕阳无限好,黄昏奈君何! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
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Posted: 2011-02-28 05:28:21 Post subject: |
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感谢二位阅评。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2011-02-28 07:22:35 Post subject: |
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胡恢宗,回首当年,热爱今天!斜阳霞彩中过好每一天! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2011-02-28 09:07:54 Post subject: |
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历经乱世,刻骨铭心。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-01 02:23:23 Post subject: |
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笑送冬归去,喜迎新春来。 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-01 05:48:41 Post subject: |
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感谢三位老师的阅评。回忆童年苦,更着今日甜。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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