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五绝三首戏赠楓坛三水

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-13 13:56:33 Post subject: 五绝三首戏赠楓坛三水

戏赠楓坛三水一赠白水上善如君体至柔锦绣肝心驰云路外笔底绘晴澜二赠影沉寒水荻岸寒江静波光漾画栏濯缨夸智颖清影惜花残三赠清水正夫一勺即解渴百川汇大观浮舟随荡漾水域似天宽 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-02-13 14:09:30 Post subject:

笔底绘晴澜、波光漾画栏、百川汇大覌 - 黄兄筆墨斑斕！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

清水正夫
童生

Joined: 14 Jan 2011
Posts: 40
Location: 中国昆明
清水正夫Collection

Posted: 2011-02-14 00:08:20 Post subject:

弱水三千，取一勺饮。谢过！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-02-14 02:29:45 Post subject:

同意老师观点！认真学习并问好黄老师！

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-02-14 06:59:37 Post subject:

謝白云兄点评，问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-14 07:02:13 Post subject:

謝清水正夫清賞！请不吝指正。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-02-14 07:04:16 Post subject:

謝笑聊兄赏阅，祝新春好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-02-15 04:57:30 Post subject:

三首俱佳，白云老师己出点晴之笔。向黄老师学习。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-15 07:06:02 Post subject:

胡兄客气了，互相切磋吧。祝新春好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2011-02-15 16:15:30 Post subject:

高山流水。黄兄好诗! 问候元宵佳节!

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-15 16:26:02 Post subject:

謝冰请賞阅，祝元宵节好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
榜眼

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Posted: 2011-02-15 18:16:57 Post subject:

北美枫林，流水潺潺。

白水
大学士

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白水Collection

Posted: 2011-02-16 08:12:27 Post subject:

谢谢老师其实这网上还有更多水呢，因为有海“洋”

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-02-16 13:48:53 Post subject:

看北美楓林，听流水潺潺，与庆宏共享眼福和耳福！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-02-16 13:54:30 Post subject:

白水说得不错，枫林还有更多的水，“智者好水”嘛，待有空，大家来写写海洋。祝各位元宵节好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
大学士

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Posted: 2011-02-16 15:40:05 Post subject:

你的名字就有“洋”

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-02-16 16:30:31 Post subject:

此“洋"非彼“洋”，此事待商量！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2011-02-16 18:55:27 Post subject:

anyway, 网上数载，从你们那里学到很多。谢谢。

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