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问天何故忽猖狂
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PostPosted: 2011-03-10 02:25:11    Post subject: 问天何故忽猖狂 Reply with quote

问天何故忽猖狂
前段悠闲忘降水,而今变脸忽猖狂。
风调雨顺何潇洒,莫教黎民愁断肠。

注:此诗于数月前因感先旱后涝而作。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-10 07:22:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡兄悲天悯人之情,令人感佩。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-10 19:22:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢黄洋界老师点评。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-12 18:17:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

天太猖狂地亦狂,
翻江倒海太平洋。
东邻列岛人寰惨,
一泯恩仇救世忙。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-12 19:20:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

“一泯恩仇救世忙”,大爱无疆!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-13 00:07:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢清水和诗。和诗境界更高,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-14 16:05:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

唱和俱动人,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-14 19:23:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

忧国忧民,大爱无疆!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-14 23:55:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢二位阅评。
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