胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-10 02:25:11 Post subject: 问天何故忽猖狂 |
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问天何故忽猖狂
前段悠闲忘降水,而今变脸忽猖狂。
风调雨顺何潇洒,莫教黎民愁断肠。
注:此诗于数月前因感先旱后涝而作。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-10 07:22:56 Post subject: |
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胡兄悲天悯人之情,令人感佩。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-10 19:22:14 Post subject: |
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感谢黄洋界老师点评。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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清水正夫 童生
Joined: 14 Jan 2011 Posts: 40 Location: 中国昆明 清水正夫Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-12 18:17:20 Post subject: |
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天太猖狂地亦狂,
翻江倒海太平洋。
东邻列岛人寰惨,
一泯恩仇救世忙。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-12 19:20:30 Post subject: |
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“一泯恩仇救世忙”,大爱无疆! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-13 00:07:49 Post subject: |
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感谢清水和诗。和诗境界更高,学习了。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
秋叶Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-14 16:05:22 Post subject: |
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唱和俱动人,学习了。 |
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SLIU 秀才
Joined: 01 Jan 2010 Posts: 384
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Posted: 2011-03-14 19:23:37 Post subject: |
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忧国忧民,大爱无疆! |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-14 23:55:12 Post subject: |
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感谢二位阅评。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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