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日偏食

小尚
秀才

Joined: 19 Mar 2007
Posts: 101

小尚Collection

Posted: 2007-03-19 17:31:12 Post subject: 日偏食

太阳，被咬去了一个角那一轮园盘变成了心的模样可是，可是我只有看着那张彩色的图片才能写出 `春天的诗行太阳，在深黑色的幕后隐去了光芒，可我怎么看它怎么象一枚残缺的月亮

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2007-03-19 19:26:31 Post subject:

隐去了光芒，可我怎么看它怎么象一枚残缺的月亮...可深入.

金金
进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
金金Collection

Posted: 2007-03-19 23:43:07 Post subject:

好啊，这首虽然气势上显弱但思想性比较有特点，赞一个，加油！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

小尚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2007
Posts: 101

小尚Collection

Posted: 2007-03-25 01:25:58 Post subject:

谢赵福治和金金。

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