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清水正夫
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 21:38:27    Post subject: 寄诸诗友 Reply with quote

人潮欲避到春城,天地未得暑气蒸。 曲厌腻肥寻雅调,诗吟寒瘦见心声。 中秋月淡共山赏,端午粽香和酒温。 树下摇钱君莫喜,泸沽星夜尚走婚。 旅昆明周年感怀
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清水正夫
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Joined: 14 Jan 2011
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 21:51:48    Post subject: 寄诸诗友 Reply with quote

山光滇北好,盘岭我独行。梅里千峰雪,泸沽半世名。彩衣映火舞,舟楫荡云横。归客立残阳,孟光举案迎? 己丑清暑游香格里拉,泸沽湖。 (半世名者,谓开发过度,恐摩梭风情难再。)
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清水正夫
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 22:10:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

万里澜沧下半空,环峰秀谷尽葱茏。雨林热带时时雨,风景南国季季风。野象激鸣惊鸟语,红裙掠过隐竹丛。难当燥热来应早,泼水清凉如雨冲。 寄友人游版纳 2010盛暑
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 05:12:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

正夫兄,白水兄等众诗友盼你望眼欲穿啊!近来可好?

曾有旧作送你,离别之情,历历在目。

七绝 送别查理君

2009.1.28

漂泊海外已十年,豪气曾经啸对天。
揖手相别无语送,网开一面等君还。

(上网北美枫)
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白水
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 06:19:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

清水好诗,qinghongh 好和。

大作拜读,南疆风情尽收眼底。
诗词唱和,北国飞绪可见几分? (哈,问你呢?才子,还是“鬼子”, 干吗还留着这个疑似日本鬼子的笔名 Confused Wink Anyway, 大家常想起你,能回来最好,暂不准备回来,能常读到你的诗歌也好。周末愉快。)
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白水
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 06:35:26    Post subject: 也贴首当年旧作,还有连接,朋友们的回帖给你许多祝福。 Reply with quote

枫林别


查理,听说你就要走了
走在TORONTO大雪封门的日子
等你踏上故土, 该是
早春二月
我不想问料峭的江南
红梅是否已经吐蕊,久别的庭院
是否会有一束淡淡的迎春花儿
为你接尘

十年了,十年
三千六百五十个日日夜夜,足以给
一位男子注满沧桑
足以在一张曾经年轻的面颊
刻下满腹经伦

今天, 在这道别的日子
我只想请你随意抽出一根
一根连绵不断的思绪
一头交给北美低吟浅唱的
文人墨客
一头飘逸江南, 任尔
随风

当年旧作的链接:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=19982&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 09:27:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

唱和俱皆!

诗吟寒瘦見心声 - 好句!

我只想請你随意抽出一根
一根連绵不断的思绪
一头交给北美低吟浅唱的
文人墨客
一头飘逸江南,任尔
随风
---深深的友谊、浓浓的诗意!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 20:12:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

正夫畅游云南, 诗情勃发哦
泸沽湖是走婚吗还是什么昏, 真该潇洒走一回 Very Happy

我去了云南, 可是把这两个地方都漏了
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清水正夫
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PostPosted: 2011-01-18 17:44:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

复白水兄:“清水正夫确是鬼子,这鬼子,不是洋鬼子,生气骂作鬼儿子;”,以此为上联,求下联。
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唐伯虎
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PostPosted: 2011-01-18 18:27:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

清水鬼子真有趣。嘴里喊着白水兄,求下联向庆宏兄(四川人才说龟儿子), 心里想的是秋香MM, 可惜秋香MM这两天忘了密码没法登陆北美枫,只好请喝瓶倒兄帮秋香(叶)MM查一下了 Very Happy Very Happy
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白水
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PostPosted: 2011-01-19 13:55:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

“清水正夫确是鬼子,这鬼子,不是洋鬼子,生气骂作鬼儿子;”

秋香妹妹疑似男子,这男子,不是男孩子,张嘴就说“个老子”。

临屏搞笑一个, 还是等秋叶,庆宏他们和吧。 Very Happy Very Happy
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2011-01-19 19:47:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

风趣幽默,唱和俱佳!
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胡恢宗
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PostPosted: 2011-01-22 17:56:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

归客残阳立,孟光举案迎。——旅游归来,家人分享愉悦。美丽景观的生动描画,
也感染了诗友,引发了唱和,活跃了荧屏。真个是一石激起千重浪,余波未绝。
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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2011-02-02 13:26:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

读清水先生几首大作,如沐春风,您太有才了,和上一首,以示怀念:


七绝-赠清水先生

滇池洱海澜沧江,碧水萦回带草香。
最是难忘君盛意,春风春雨盼朝阳。
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