晴宝儿
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 Posted: 2010-12-24 22:18:03 Post subject: 后丁香记《丁香岛》（外三首） |
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《丁香岛》
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去岛上，种小枝，阳光和花蕾
像黄蓉的桃花岛，我的岛都是丁香
它们开花，我就构想色彩、高贵、爱与香气
它们不开花，我就做绿林子的美人，我钻进它的树洞
它进入我的梦
冬天，伴叶子一厘厘深入，抱紧，化掉
让雪一劫劫覆盖，又唤醒
白日光，时光和绿裙子
2010-10-26
《小段》
我和时光一点点瘦下去
花朵，颜色，香气从浓郁到消失
没什么不能，还有点尘世的恨和不平
丁香的紫那么浅，若有若无
我缓缓走，绿叶子深深浅浅
林子里日光新鲜，单纯牛奶倒进桶的乳白
乳香，弥漫眼前的早晨我依然
瘦下去，晨光和世界如此安好
如此安宁
2010-10-26
《瘦美人》
会有一朵山花，刚刚好叫我的名字
不迟不早，在上午
日光暖暖，风拂过脸颊
和蔼慈祥，她从不言语等待一朵花慢慢成长
路边的草青葱，丁香在
老地方默默望我，数着心形的绿叶
我默默点头努力走过她身旁
世界会很美，很童话
我瘦到刚刚好，就会看到一朵山花
打开的秘密，真实又热爱
2010-10-27
《山花》
拆掉篱笆，围墙，远近的障碍
姐姐妹妹，我看到你们了
黄的紫的白的，你们裙装飘飘葵花的大眼睛
藏有山中隐语，轻轻经过
默记每株植物的名字，特性及毒性
破解花朵秘纹，最好自己也变成一朵
香气接近的花
2010-10-29
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| Posted: 2010-12-25 10:08:38 Post subject: |
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我的怡园
也有一树小花
淡淡的紫，淡淡的香
淡淡的，张开随风远去的云儿
朋友，如果你抬头正好看见
一定是我为你送去的圣诞礼物 |
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晴宝儿
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| Posted: 2010-12-26 22:38:54 Post subject: |
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| 杯中冲浪 wrote: |
我和时光一点点瘦下去
——这一句足矣。 |
时光又瘦了一年，提前祝元旦快乐。
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晴宝儿
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| Posted: 2010-12-26 22:40:59 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
我的怡园
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怡园种的什么花，淡淡的紫淡淡的白
羡煞我们啊，快住到神仙里去了
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 20:02:34 Post subject: |
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我也要一个岛~~种满想要的花草~~连山都种进去~~
新年快乐~~
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2011-01-04 06:09:44 Post subject: |
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我瘦到刚刚好，就会看到一朵山花
打开的秘密，真实又热爱
诗歌写得很明快，情感炙热~问好晴宝儿，感谢你给我写的评，新年快乐！ |
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晴宝儿
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| Posted: 2011-01-05 05:03:42 Post subject: |
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| 安红红 wrote: |
我也要一个岛~~种满想要的花草~~连山都种进去~~
新年快乐~~ |
好饿，2011每人一座岛哈哈
快乐
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| Posted: 2011-01-05 05:09:24 Post subject: |
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| 半溪明月 wrote: |
我瘦到刚刚好，就会看到一朵山花
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很高兴看到明月，明月的诗越来越精彩可嚼，照片也没变，好象时光还在昨天，只是文字已如海越来越宽广美丽。
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白水
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| Posted: 2011-01-09 18:15:50 Post subject: |
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| 晴宝儿 wrote: |
| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
我的怡园
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怡园种的什么花，淡淡的紫淡淡的白
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hi, 宝儿，还真没注意你的问题。我家后院恰好有一树丁香，很漂亮。还有迎春，兰花，玫瑰，郁金香，，，，，，盼你们有机会来玩。 |
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| Posted: 2011-01-09 23:01:20 Post subject: 问好宝儿 |
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其实，在我翻译《那些花》之前，我先相中了这首。可我感情不专一，看见那些花，就扑上去了。 
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| Posted: 2011-01-10 16:33:22 Post subject: |
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| Rhapsodia wrote: |
其实，在我翻译《那些花》之前，我先相中了这首。可我感情不专一，看见那些花，就扑上去了。
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hi, are you “晚枫”？ nice to meet you. |
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| Posted: 2011-01-10 17:37:47 Post subject: |
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| Rhapsodia wrote: |
其实，在我翻译《那些花》之前，我先相中了这首。可我感情不专一，看见那些花，就扑上去了。
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hi, are you “晚枫”？ nice to meet you. |
Dear Moonligh, yeah, it is me.  Encouraged by Baor, I registered my name here only two days ago. Nice to meet you! |
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| Posted: 2011-01-10 18:01:27 Post subject: |
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It's good. I believe that baor will be very happy same as peace, beacuse he lives in BC too  |
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| Posted: 2011-01-10 19:00:55 Post subject: |
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问好Rhapsodia, 洛夫和氩痃都在温哥华
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| Posted: 2011-01-10 21:33:58 Post subject: |
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| 问好Rhapsodia, 洛夫和氩痃都在温哥华 |
你好，和平岛！Moonlight说的peace，就是您吧？幸会！感谢您的情况介绍，我会多留意他们的！ |
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| Posted: 2011-01-10 22:19:19 Post subject: |
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| Rhapsodia wrote: |
| hepingdao wrote: |
| 问好Rhapsodia, 洛夫和氩痃都在温哥华 |
你好，和平岛！Moonlight说的peace，就是您吧？幸会！感谢您的情况介绍，我会多留意他们的！ |
欢迎你来网站，
洛夫他们会搞一个年会，如有兴趣，可以参加哦
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| Posted: 2011-01-10 22:49:55 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
| Rhapsodia wrote: |
| hepingdao wrote: |
| 问好Rhapsodia, 洛夫和氩痃都在温哥华 |
你好，和平岛！Moonlight说的peace，就是您吧？幸会！感谢您的情况介绍，我会多留意他们的！ |
欢迎你来网站，
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是吗？好事情啊！如果时间和地点方便，我想还是能参加的。不过我初来乍到，在诗歌方面还需要多向你们学习。我是来当学生的～ |
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不客气，相互学习，我知道之后会告诉你的
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