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蝶戀花 憶桂林(代巍拔友转贴)
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 11:01:23    Post subject: 蝶戀花 憶桂林(代巍拔友转贴) Reply with quote

蝶戀花 憶桂林
2011 虎年臘月 巍拔

1981年曾游桂林,至今已三十年矣。桂林山水甲天下,果然名不虛傳。



翠嶺黛峰方洗雨,

漁父歸舟,

停棹呼鹚鷺。

綠水閑云青石路,

斜陽竹影農家戶。



小碧浣溪喧日暮,

隔岸秋波,

莫道芳心許,

欲借新詞羞寄語,

至今遺恨相思苦。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 13:56:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢qinghongh, 欣赏。
上半阙把桂林景色描写的真实亲切,把人带回到那曾经流连忘返的画境。 而后半阙嘛,,,,,, Very Happy Very Happy 改天我们又有故事听了, 让他讲讲他的罗曼史 Wink
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 22:49:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

巍拔兄词作得宋词真韵,至今遗恨四字,可谓性情中人。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 04:53:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

清水正夫 wrote:
巍拔兄词作得宋词真韵,至今遗恨四字,可谓性情中人。


朝阳正夫兄,我们今日诗友白水家聚会,遗憾你远在春城,难得一会啊!遥祝新年好!多保重。

七绝 送别查理君

2009.1.28

漂泊海外已十年,豪气曾经啸对天。
揖手相别无语送,网开一面等君还。

(上网北美枫)
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 09:13:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

细描桂林景,抒展心中情!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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